(:I'll just call you cherry.)
You may don't know my name and how l look like but I know how you look like and how you were useful. You were very useful and comfortable when I study and concentrate. However, you were little big to my hands and finally,,, I lost you. I'm so sorry to you and I really want to find you.
I don't really know why and whre I lost you! so I go crazy because I can't know where you are. In my last memory of you, is in school restaurant and when I tried to grab my hair and saw my wrist and I noticed that I lost you. I have to be more careful when I take you and also your friends. I'm so sorry to say this things becasue you may not know that you're losen by me. I;m very sad that you don't have any cell phone or something to connect with me. I'm very sad that you don't have legs and you cannot find me. I'm very very sad that you don't have your eyes. Even if you have legs and cellphone, if you don't have your eyes you cannot do anything!!! Also I'm really sorry I was a bad owner. I hope someone takes you asnd takes care you very carefully and anybody step on you. If someone takes you, it's way better than having a bad owner. I'll just wish you to stay alive and anybody hit or make you painful.
If I am able to go back to the moment that I lost you, I can be more good owner to you. However, I cannot return my last moment so I'll just be a sensitive and good owner to your lovely friends. My lovely, pretty and smart cherry, I promise to be careful, I promise to be a perfect owner to your friends and I promise and I wish you can meet better owner than me.
(:I'm sorry that you cannot speak any languages even Korean.
-2012.7.26th.Thursday-
-Sincerely, Sarah Eim-
Hi Heejung, I'm your Writing TA. I enjoyed reading you ode and how you try to look at the perspective of the rubber band. On the other hand, I see some mistakes such as "My last memory of you is", "sorry to say these things" and "you are lost by me". However, I'm sure that we can improve on them as we go along. :)
ReplyDeleteGood post. I would love to see a picture of a hair band so I can imagine your words related to it. Remember that the TA's are available to help you with grammar before you post. Use them!
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